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三天主考 慈悲訓示

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加州德恩壇 · 2014.01.04 · 檢討班

20140104CAde*

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鎮壇詩 Opening Verse · board-written (four lines)

ZT1
三復斯言慎行前 晨鐘暮鼓警南閻
sān fù sī yán shèn xíng qián · chén zhōng mù gǔ jǐng nán yán
Three times over turn these words: let care in conduct come first. The morning bell, the evening drum — their warning sounds over this southern world of men.Say these words over to yourself again and again: before anything else, be careful how you act. The bell at dawn and the drum at dusk sound their warning across this world where people live.

The acrostic / 三復斯言 / 慎行前 / 南閻 — The first characters of the four 鎮壇詩 lines read down as 三 · 天 · 主 · 考 — 三天主考, exactly the office the speaker names for himself one line later in the 吾乃. The acrostic falls at the whole-line level (each line’s opening character), the same pattern as sibling `20220730CAde1`. Each of those four characters is also load-bearing inside its own line — 三 opens the Analects allusion here, 天 is the Heaven that sends the Dao down at `ZT2`, 主 is presiding at `ZT3`, 考 is examining at `ZT4` — so the acrostic is not padding. It cannot survive into English and no attempt is made to force it; it is carried by this note. — 三復斯言 is 論語·先進: 「南容三復白圭,孔子以其兄之子妻之。」 — Nan Rong repeatedly recited the “white jade” lines, and Confucius gave him his elder brother’s daughter in marriage. The lines Nan Rong kept reciting are 詩經·大雅·抑: 「白圭之玷,尚可磨也;斯言之玷,不可為也。」 — a flaw in white jade can still be ground away; a flaw in speech cannot be undone. The phrase therefore names a specific discipline about care in speech, not repetition in general. Corpus-grounded (dual attestation, via 禮記’s explicit 《詩》云 citation marker; primary source cited). — 慎行前: 前 is adverbial here, first of all — the priority sense used again at `ZT3` (一路先), `B12` (濟世前) and `B21` (自照前). — 南閻 is short for 南閻浮提, Jambudvīpa, the southern continent of the Buddhist cosmos where human beings live: a place of hardship, and the only place from which the work can be done. Rendered as a world-reference; the cosmology is carried here rather than in the line. (Outside the local classics corpus’s scope; kept at the researcher’s attribution, 長阿含經, at normal confidence.) — 晨鐘暮鼓 is a Tang-and-later poetic idiom (李咸用《山中》), not a scriptural locus; carried as idiom, not cited as scripture.

ZT2
天降大道拯黎民 禮門義路仁義宣
tiān jiàng dà dào zhěng lí mín · lǐ mén yì lù rén yì xuān
Heaven sends the Great Dao down to rescue the common people; propriety is the gate, rightness the road, and humaneness and rightness are proclaimed.Heaven sends the Great Dao down to rescue ordinary people — not a chosen few. Courtesy is the gate you pass through and rightness is the road you walk, and both kindness and rightness are proclaimed aloud.

黎民 / 禮門義路 — 黎民, literally the black-haired multitude, is the ordinary people at large; the line’s scale is deliberate — the Dao is not sent down for a select few. — 禮門義路 is 孟子·萬章下: 「夫義,路也;禮,門也。惟君子能由是路,出入是門也。」 — rightness is the road; propriety is the gate; only the noble person travels that road and passes through that gate. Mencius turns two abstractions into architecture, and the line keeps them that way. Corpus-confirmed (book-level exact match). — 仁宣: both terms are proclaimed, and both are kept in the English — the doubling is in the source.

ZT3
主神思察通權變 改過遷善一路先
zhǔ shén sī chá tōng quán biàn · gǎi guò qiān shàn yī lù xiān
Presiding, quick and subtle in thought, discerning, penetrating to the weight of each moment; reform your faults, turn toward the good — that goes first the whole road.Presiding over it, with a quick and fine-grained mind that sees clearly and reads right through to what each particular moment actually calls for. Mend your faults and turn toward the good — that step comes first, and it stays first the whole way.

主 (the parse) / 神思察 / 通權變 — ⚠ The line is parsed 主/神思察, not 主神/思察. 主 is the acrostic character doing double duty as presiding / holding sway; reading 主神 as a compound would produce a named divine rank the source never gives, which would be adding an identity to the text. The conservative parse is adopted, consistent with `ZT4`’s 考察, where 考 works the same way. — 神思察: thought that is spirit-quick and fine-grained, discerning. — 通權變 is the Confucian art of weighing. 權 is literally the sliding weight on a steelyard, which must be moved along the beam to find balance; the classical pairing is 經 (the constant rule) against 權 (what the actual situation requires). 通 is penetrating through to — mastery of that weighing, not mere flexibility. — The couplet has no grammatical subject in the Chinese and none is supplied in English; the same restraint is kept at `ZT4`. — 改過遷善 has a long gnomic pedigree (compare 周易, 益卦象傳: 「君子以見善則遷,有過則改」); 一路先 adds the priority — this step goes first, and goes first the whole way.

ZT4
考察古今仙佛聖 允執厥中成聖賢
kǎo chá gǔ jīn xiān fú shèng · yǔn zhí jué zhōng chéng shèng xián
Examining the immortals, buddhas and sages of past and present; hold sincerely to the Mean, and become sage and worthy.Examining the immortals, buddhas and sages of every age, past and present alike. Hold honestly to the centre, leaning neither way — that is how a person becomes a sage and a worthy.

考察 / 允執厥中 / 厥 = `jué` — 考察 is to examine and investigate: the acrostic character, and precisely the act the speaker’s office names. What he examines is 古今仙佛聖 — the immortals, buddhas and sages of every age — so the standard he marks against is not local. Rendered immortals, buddhas and sages; never “gods.”允執厥中 is 尚書·大禹謨, the sixteen-character transmission Shun is said to have given Yu with the throne: 「人心惟危,道心惟微,惟精惟一,允執厥中。」 — the human heart is precarious, the heart of the Dao is faint; be refined, be single, and hold sincerely to the centre. 允 is in good faith, sincerely; 厥 is the classical possessive, = 其; 中 is the centre held without leaning. It is not splitting the difference or softening a judgment — it is finding the position the situation actually warrants and holding it when nobody is checking. Corpus-grounded (dual attestation, via 朱子語類’s explicit 書云 marker; primary source cited). — ⚠ Pinyin: 厥 reads `jué`. The Step-1 research output glossed it `qué`; that is an error in the research file, corrected in the Per-Line Pinyin layer and recorded here so no downstream artifact inherits it. 中 reads `zhōng` (the Mean), not `zhòng`.

吾乃 Self-Introduction · board-written

WN
吾乃 三天主考 奉 Φ旨 來至佛壇 進門參叩 皇 Φ顏 再問弟妹各安然 平平心氣 再待為兄訓批言 哈哈
wú nǎi · sān tiān zhǔ kǎo · fèng · Mǔ zhǐ · lái zhì fú tán · jìn mén cān kòu · huáng · Mǔ yán · zài wèn dì mèi gè ān rán · píng píng xīn qì · zài dài wèi xiōng xùn pī yán · hā hā
I am the Chief Examiner of the Three Heavens, bearing the Eternal Mother’s decree, and I come to the prayer hall. Entering the gate, I bow in audience before the August Eternal Mother’s countenance, and then I ask my younger brothers and sisters: are you each at ease? Settle your hearts, steady your breath, then wait while your elder brother sets down his words of instruction and marking. Ha ha!I am the Chief Examiner of the Three Heavens. I come bearing the Eternal Mother’s decree, and I arrive at the prayer hall. Stepping through the gate, I first bow low before the August Eternal Mother — and only then do I turn to my younger brothers and sisters and ask: is each of you well? Let your hearts settle and your breathing steady. Then wait a moment while your elder brother writes out his words of teaching and marking. Ha ha!

三天主考 (bare) / the two Φ tiers / the 皇 Φ spacing variant / 參叩 / 訓批言 — ⚠⚠ The self-description is rendered literally and nothing is inferred from it. 「三天主考」 → Chief Examiner of the Three Heavens (主考 is the officer who sets the questions and marks the papers). The 吾乃 slot gives the office and nothing else — no personal name, no relational self-title, no lineage, no history — unlike sibling `20220730CAde1`, which adds 爾師兄. Nothing may be added downstream. The kinship register the line establishes (弟妹 / 為兄) is read as evidence of tone — an elder brother’s voice rather than a superior’s — and as nothing more; 為兄 is a first-person self-reference in the body of the teaching, not a formal self-title, and is deliberately excluded from the Scroll Elevation Map’s deity level. — ⚠⚠ Φ is TWO-TIERED here, and the tiers are kept apart. 「奉 Φ旨」 carries no 皇 prefix — single-tier — and is rendered the Eternal Mother’s decree. 「皇 Φ顏」 carries the 皇 prefix — two-tier — and is rendered the August Eternal Mother’s countenance, with 皇 carried adjectivally. The two forms are never collapsed. Never a gendered pronoun; never “God”; never flattened to a bare “the Mother.” — ⚠ Structural variant preserved: the source records a full-width space between 皇 and Φ — 「皇 Φ顏」 — where the fleet’s more common form is the adjacent compound 皇Φ with no internal space (cf. `20210926TWsy1`, `20240915TWsy1`, `20241020TWsy`). The space is preserved exactly as written and mirrored as a ` · ` phrase break in the pinyin layer; it does not change the translation. — ⚠ Known open reconciliation point, not resolved here: `distill/norms.md` and `temple-writing-style.md` standardize 皇Φ → ”the Sovereign Mother,” while this run’s standing guard rail treats that term as forbidden and uses August + Eternal Mother, as above. Two conventions cannot both be current in one corpus; the identical conflict was surfaced independently by teaching `20220806NYfd*`, making this a two-teaching-corroborated finding. Recommended for translation-publisher adjudication, to be canonized in `distill/norms.md` + `temple-writing-style.md` and swept across the affected siblings. (The Φ glyph is a typographic placeholder standing in for a Private-Use-Area codepoint in the source record — a substitution of glyph, not an interpretive claim about the one addressed. The full-width spaces before  Φ旨 and around 皇 Φ顏 are the classical 敬空, the blank left before a supreme referent, and are reproduced exactly in the Chinese field.) — Note the order of reverence: the audience upward (進門參叩) is paid first, and only then the greeting downward to the assembly (再問弟妹). 參叩 is to bow in formal audience; 參 reads `cān`. — 平平心氣 — settle the heart, steady the breath — is the class’s actual precondition, not a courtesy. — 訓批言 is what an examiner does: 批 (`pī`) is precisely the marking-comment written on a submitted paper. The examination motif runs from 主考 in this title through 考察 (`ZT4`) to 大考選 and 判分 (`B01`), and one English word-family — examine / marking / judged and parted — is used for it throughout. — The opening 哈哈 here is answered by 哈哈止 at `B23` ([^b23]).

本訓 Main Teaching · board-written (twenty-three segments)

B01
天演淘汰大考選 賢與不肖判分前
tiān yǎn táo tài dà kǎo xuǎn · xián yǔ bù xiào pàn fēn qián
Heaven’s sifting winnows and casts away; the Great Examination makes its choice, and worthy and unworthy are judged and parted right here in front of us.Heaven is sifting — winnowing out what will not hold — and the great examination is making its choice; those who measure up and those who do not are being told apart right here, in front of us.

天演 / 大考選 / 不肖 — ⚠ 天演 is deliberately de-Darwinized. 嚴復 (Yán Fù) coined 天演 in 1898 to render Huxley’s Evolution and Ethics; here the biological sense is displaced and the winnowing is by virtue, not by fitness. Rendered Heaven’s sifting winnows and casts away — the mechanism without the theory. No “natural selection” and no “survival of the fittest” appears in any layer. — 大考選, the Great Examination making its choice, echoes the speaker’s own office (主考) one segment earlier. — 不肖 does not mean wicked. 肖 means to resemble; a son who resembles his father is presumed to have inherited his virtue, so 不肖 is literally not resembling — the failure to live up to those who came before. That is exactly what `B04` then invokes with 前賢苦心來成全. Attribution 孟子·萬章上 kept at normal confidence (ubiquitous pre-Qin vocabulary, outside the corpus’s confident-match range). 肖 reads `xiào`. — 判分前: judged and parted right here in front, not at some later reckoning.

B02
今日辦道非一般 認清理路各向前
jīn rì bàn dào fēi yì bān · rèn qīng lǐ lù gè xiàng qián
Today’s work of the Dao is no ordinary thing — see the road of principle clearly, and each of you press forward.The work of the Dao going on today is nothing ordinary. See clearly where the reasoning of it leads, and let every one of you move forward.
B03
凡事莫要來計較 各當自己路來選
fán shì mò yào lái jì jiào · gè dāng zì jǐ lù lái xuǎn
In all things, do not come reckoning and comparing; each of you must choose your own road.Whatever comes up, do not sit there keeping score and measuring yourself against others. Each of you has your own road to choose.
B04
今日來此為了什 前賢苦心來成全
jīn rì lái cǐ wèi le shén · qián xián kǔ xīn lái chéng quán
Today you came here — for what? The worthies before you spend their hearts to bring you to completion.You came here today — but what for? Those who walked this road ahead of you are spending themselves, at real cost, to bring you through to completion.

為了什 / 前賢 / 苦心 / 成全 — 為了什 is 為了什麼 with the final character elided for the seven-syllable line; 為 reads `wèi` (the benefactive) here, unlike 為兄 at `WN`/`B23`, where it reads `wéi`. — 前賢 is read in temple register: the worthies who came before you, senior fellow-practitioners — kept distinct from 聖賢 (`ZT4`, `B11`: the sages and worthies held up as models) and from 仙佛聖 (`ZT4`: the immortals, buddhas and sages being examined). Three classes, three renderings. — 苦心 is bitter-heartedness: effort that costs the person making it. Somebody is paying for this class, which is the ground on which repentance is then asked for. — The tense is left unmarked in English, matching the Chinese and the surrounding present-tense imperatives.

B05
懺悔改過消罪遷 明白此時天機運
chàn huǐ gǎi guò xiāo zuì qiān · míng bái cǐ shí tiān jī yùn
Repent, reform your faults, dissolve your sins and turn toward the good; understand the turning of Heaven’s moment now.Repent, mend what you have done wrong, let your wrongs dissolve away, and turn yourself toward the good. Understand how Heaven’s moment is turning right now.
B06
一時一機莫荒全 自己心念否明全
yī shí yī jī mò huāng quán · zì jǐ xīn niàn fǒu míng quán
Not one hour, not one opening, is to be let run wholly to waste; your own heart’s thoughts — are they wholly clear?Not a single hour, not a single opening, is to be let go entirely to waste. And the thoughts in your own heart — are they entirely clear to you?

一時一機 / the adverbial 全 — 一時一機: not one hour, not one opening. — 全 is adverbial in three places in this teaching and is rendered as wholly / whole at each — 莫荒 (here), 否明 (here), 否修 (`B18`) — rather than treated as a rhyme-filler. If any of the three is later revised, revise all three together. 否 reads `fǒu` (the interrogative “or not”) at every occurrence in this teaching (`B06`, `B14`, `B16`, `B18`), never 否泰 `pǐ`.

B07
真心來此懺前愆 上天赦免罪過愆
zhēn xīn lái cǐ chàn qián qiān · shàng tiān shè miǎn zuì guò qiān
Come here with a true heart and repent the transgressions behind you; Heaven above pardons sin, fault and transgression.Come here with a heart that means it, and repent the transgressions that lie behind you; Heaven above pardons sin, fault and transgression alike.

前愆 / the 愆 word-chain / 赦免 — 前愆 is specifically the transgressions behind you, already committed. — ⚠ 愆 is this teaching’s drumbeat and is rendered transgression at all five occurrences — `B07` (×2), `B16`, `B17`, `B20` — so the chain stays audible in English. If it is later revised, revise all five together. — 上天赦免罪過愆 keeps all three nouns distinct (sin, fault, transgression). This is the teaching’s widest-open line, and its condition is stated first, in the preceding half: 真心 — a heart that means it. Pardon here is being released from the old account so the road can be walked again, not an offsetting of one thing against another.

B08
好好把握此良機 莫要辜負此程班
hǎo hǎo bǎ wò cǐ liáng jī · mò yào gū fù cǐ chéng bān
Take good hold of this fine opportunity; do not squander this course of class.Take a firm hold of this good chance, and do not let this course of class go to waste.
B09
荼蘗之苦莫氣餒 深耕勤耘志向前
tú bò zhī kǔ mò qì něi · shēn gēng qín yún zhì xiàng qián
At the taste of bitter herb and bitter bark, do not lose heart — plow deep, weed diligently, and let your resolve press forward.When the bitterness gets as bitter as it gets, do not lose heart. Plow deep, weed patiently, and keep your resolve pointed forward.

荼蘗之苦 — 荼 is a bitter herb; 蘗 (= 檗, read `bò`, not `niè`) is the phellodendron, whose bark is intensely bitter and used medicinally. The phrase originates in the imagery of 詩經·邶風·谷風 (「誰謂荼苦,其甘如薺」), but the compound 荼蘗 hardened in later usage into settled idiom for extreme hardship. ⚠ The 詩經’s original reversal — “who says the bitter herb is bitter? to me it was sweet as shepherd’s purse” — is deliberately NOT imported; only the bitterness is rendered. Corpus-grounded (dual attestation, via 後漢書’s quotation of the 詩經 line; primary source cited). — The answer given to that bitterness is agricultural and slow: 深耕勤耘, plow deep and weed diligently.

B10
精神莫要來頹廢 打起精神學時研
jīng shén mò yào lái tuí fèi · dǎ qǐ jīng shén xué shí yán
Do not let the spirit sink into dejection; rouse it up, and study and delve while the time is yours.Do not let your spirit sag and go slack. Rouse it up, and study and dig into things while the time is still yours.
B11
效法聖賢孜而學 不輟不輟建功端
xiào fǎ shèng xián zī ér xué · bù chuò bù chuò jiàn gōng duān
Take the sages and worthies as your model and study without slackening; never ceasing, never ceasing, lay the ground of merit.Take the sages and worthies for your model, and study steadily without letting up. Never stopping, never stopping — that is how the ground of merit gets laid.

孜 / 不輟不輟 / 建功端 — 孜 is the 孜孜 of 尚書 (「惟日孜孜,無敢逸豫」), unremitting diligence. — 不輟不輟’s doubling is in the source and is preserved verbatim in both registers — a seven-character verse form of this rigor does not double a word by accident; it is the sound of someone who knows the class will want to stop. — 建功端 recurs verbatim at `B19` and is rendered identically both times (lay the ground of merit). If it is later revised, revise both together. — 效法聖賢: 聖賢 here are models for emulation, distinct from 前賢 at `B04` ([^b04]).

B12
明白天時濟世前 今日機緣非等閒
míng bái tiān shí jì shì qián · jīn rì jī yuán fēi děng xián
Understand: the heavenly hour stands before you, to save the world; today’s convergence of moment and affinity is no common thing.Understand this: Heaven’s hour stands right in front of you, and it is for the saving of the world. That the moment and the connection should meet as they have today is nothing ordinary.

濟世前 / 機緣 — 濟世前: 前 again adverbial for priority (see [^zt1]) — the heavenly hour stands before you, and its direction is outward, toward saving the world. This is the first turn outward in a teaching that has so far been about oneself. — 機緣 is two things, and both are kept: 機, the opportune moment, and 緣, the affinity or connection that brings people to it — hence convergence of moment and affinity, not simply “opportunity.” 非等閒: no common thing.

B13
莫要輕觀佛仙護 在此觀看爾等們
mò yào qīng guān fú xiān hù · zài cǐ guān kàn ěr děng men
Do not lightly regard the guarding of the buddhas and immortals — here they are, watching over every one of you.Do not take lightly the way the buddhas and immortals keep guard over you. They are right here, watching over every one of you.
B14
否有真心來懺悔 莫要說自無罪過
fǒu yǒu zhēn xīn lái chàn huǐ · mò yào shuō zì wú zuì guò
Is there a true heart in you, come here to repent? Do not say of yourself that you have no sin, no fault.Is there a heart in you that truly means to repent? Do not tell yourself you have nothing to answer for.
B15
好好反思自身觀 自從修道以來矣
hǎo hǎo fǎn sī zì shēn guān · zì cóng xiū dào yǐ lái yǐ
Reflect well, and look upon your own person: ever since you began to cultivate the Dao,Think it over carefully, and take a good look at yourself — going all the way back to the day you began to cultivate the Dao,

The enjambment across `B15`–`B16` — This couplet runs on grammatically into the next; the sentence begun at 自從修道以來矣 completes only at 罪過累累否明愆. The enjambment is preserved in both registers rather than resolved into two closed sentences. — 自從修道以來 sets the scope of the self-examination: not this year, but the whole span since cultivation began.

B16
罪過累累否明愆 趁此今日一掃完
zuì guò lěi lěi fǒu míng qiān · chèn cǐ jīn rì yī sǎo wán
sins and faults heaped one on another — do you see your transgressions clearly? Take this very day and sweep them all away.wrongs and faults piled one on top of another — can you see your own transgressions plainly? Use this very day and sweep the whole pile clean.
B17
提起精神無對待 不管他人之事愆
tí qǐ jīng shén wú duì dài · bù guǎn tā rén zhī shì qiān
Lift up your spirit, standing clear of opposition; do not concern yourself with other people’s affairs, other people’s transgressions.Lift your spirit up, and stop setting yourself over against anyone. Other people’s business and other people’s transgressions are not yours to mind.

無對待 — the SENSE is flagged, not the character ⚠ — 對待 is the classical term for relative duality, standing over against something; colloquially it also means simply to treat / to regard. The reading adopted here — standing clear of opposition and comparison with others — is motivated structurally, by the immediately following 不管他人之事愆, and is not lexically certain. Recommended for senior / 原稿 review on sense. Per the retrace-before-correcting discipline, no character is in question: the text reads 無對待 and stands exactly as written; only its sense is uncertain, so the retrace rule is not triggered. — 事 is rendered transgressions, holding the 愆 chain ([^b07]). — The line names a well-known failure of self-examination — that it drifts within moments into examining somebody else — and forbids it.

B18
只管自己否修全 時間短暫莫輕忽
zhǐ guǎn zì jǐ fǒu xiū quán · shí jiān duǎn zàn mò qīng hū
Attend only to this: whether you yourself have cultivated whole. The time is short — do not treat it lightly.Attend to one thing only: whether your own cultivation is complete. The time is short — do not take it lightly.
B19
行培德慧建功端 菩提自性自滿圓
xíng péi dé huì jiàn gōng duān · pú tí zì xìng zì mǎn yuán
In practice, nourish virtue and wisdom, lay the ground of merit, and the bodhi self-nature comes of itself to full roundness.In how you actually live, nourish both goodness and wisdom, and lay the ground of merit; then that awakened nature already in you comes round to fullness of its own accord.

培德慧 / 建功端 / 菩提自性 / 自滿圓 — 培德慧: nourish both virtue and wisdom, the pair held together. 建功端 is identical to its occurrence at `B11` and is rendered identically ([^b11]). — 菩提自性 is the Chan formulation given its clearest statement in the 六祖壇經·般若品: 「菩提自性,本來清淨,但用此心,直了成佛。」 — the bodhi self-nature is originally pure; use just this heart, and you go straight through to awakening. Compare 疑問品: 「菩提只向心覓,何勞向外求玄。」 — seek bodhi only in the heart; why labor to seek the mysterious outside? Both were confirmed against the local classics corpus by an independent re-query (the Step-1b pass had returned them ungrounded). Glossed as ordinary Chan/Mahāyāna vocabulary; no sectarian attribution is made. — ⚠ The verb matters: 自滿圓 — it comes to full roundness of itself. The nature is uncovered, not installed; the work is subtraction, which is why `B16`’s 一掃完 (sweep it all away) precedes it.

B20
人生短暫莫輕觀 握此良辰速改愆
rén shēng duǎn zàn mò qīng guān · wò cǐ liáng chén sù gǎi qiān
A human life is brief — do not regard it lightly; grasp this good hour and swiftly mend your transgressions.A human life is short — do not think little of it. Take hold of this good hour and set your transgressions right without delay.
B21
廻光反省自照前 摩訶般若行自度
huí guāng fǎn xǐng zì zhào qián · mó hē bō rě xíng zì dù
Turn the light back and examine yourself — illumine your own self first of all; with the great wisdom of prajñā, take up the practice and ferry yourself across.Turn the light around and look at yourself — shine it on your own self before anything else. With that great wisdom which sees things as they really are, take up the practice and carry yourself across.

廻光反省 / 自照前 / 摩訶般若 / 自度 — 廻光 (= 迴光) is turning the light back: the attention that ordinarily runs outward is reversed onto oneself. 省 reads `xǐng` (to examine oneself), not `shěng`. — ⚠ 自照前 is read illumine your own self FIRST OF ALL, not “illumine what lies ahead.” 前/先 is used adverbially for priority three other times in this teaching (慎行 `ZT1`, 一路 `ZT3`, 濟世 `B12`), and `B17`–`B18` have just insisted on minding one’s own account before anyone else’s. The alternative reading is grammatically available and is recorded in the pipeline’s literal layer; this is an interpretive choice, not a certainty.摩訶般若 is Sanskrit transliterated: 摩訶 = mahā, great; 般若 = prajñā, read `bō rě` (never `bān ruò`) — not cleverness but the wisdom that sees things as they actually are. 般若波羅蜜多心經 opens on exactly this: 「觀自在菩薩,行深般若波羅蜜多時,照見五蘊皆空,度一切苦厄。」 Corpus-confirmed (exact match). Per the norms’ boundary rule the term is kept and glossed rather than dissolved. — ⚠ 行自度 shares its character 度 with 六度 one line later, and the pun is carried in English by shared crossing/ferrying vocabulary ([^b22]). 度 reads `dù` (to ferry across) at both occurrences, not `duó`.

B22
六度萬行力向前 今日至此不多言
liù dù wàn xíng lì xiàng qián · jīn rì zhì cǐ bù duō yán
The six crossings and the ten thousand practices — press forward with all your strength. Today I come this far and will say no more.The six ways of crossing over and the ten thousand practices — put your whole strength into going forward. Today I have come this far, and I will say no more.

六度萬行 / the 度 pun — 六度 are the six pāramitās — 布施 (giving), 持戒 (moral discipline), 忍辱 (patience under injury), 精進 (energy), 禪定 (meditative absorption), 般若 (wisdom); 度 renders pāramitā, crossing to the far shore. 萬行 is the ten thousand practices; 行 reads `xíng`. — ⚠ This is the same character as 自度 at `B21`, one line earlier, and the echo is the argument: you cross yourself over by means of the very practices that carry other people over. The two lines are one movement and the order cannot be reversed — illumine yourself first, then go out. The shared English vocabulary (crossing / ferry across) is deliberate at both occurrences; if either is revised, revise both.

B23
為兄暫隱護壇前 哈哈止
wèi xiōng zàn yǐn hù tán qián · hā hā zhǐ
Your elder brother now withdraws from sight for a while, keeping watch before the altar. Ha ha — I stop here.Your elder brother will slip out of sight for a while now, standing guard before the altar. Ha ha — and there I stop.

The FUSED 哈哈止 / 暫隱 / 護壇前 / 板訓 — ⚠ This segment is composite, and the fusion is a textual fact preserved from the source. The raw record has 「為兄暫隱護壇前 哈哈止」 as one continuous line: the coda 哈哈止 is fused directly onto the couplet’s second half, separated only by the ordinary hinge full-width space, with no leading full-width space of its own and no line of its own — unlike the fleet’s more common standalone 「 哈哈止」 line (cf. `20220730CAde1`, where the coda carries its own leading 全角 space). No space has been inserted, no segment split applied, and no normalization performed. Consequently this teaching has 28 physical source lines, not 29, and 哈哈止 shares `B23`’s line in every derived layer including pinyin. — 為兄 is the same first-person self-reference as at `WN`, closing the kinship frame the teaching opened with. — 暫隱 is temporary: 暫 is for a while, 隱 is to go out of view — he stops being visible, he does not leave; and 護壇前 is keeping watch before the altar. He becomes invisible and stays. — 哈哈 is the warm laugh customary in these teachings — never mockery — and it answers the 哈哈 that closed the 吾乃 line ([^wn]). — 止 is read literally. This is a 板訓, written out character by character on a board (the same category of channeled writing as the 沙訓 written in sand; only the physical medium differs, and no difference in doctrinal weight is implied). 止 is the writing instrument coming to rest.