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白水老人 慈悲訓示

德恩壇 · 2015.09.07 · 壇主班

20150907CAde*

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鎮壇詩 Opening Verse · recited (four irregular free-verse lines)

ZT1
吾愛此身更患此身
wú ài cǐ shēn gèng huàn cǐ shēn
I love this body — and all the more, this body is my trouble.I love this body of mine — and it is this very body that troubles me most of all.

here is the 大患 of the 《道德經》 chapter thirteen — 「吾所以有大患者,為吾有身」 (wú suǒ yǐ yǒu dà huàn zhě, wèi wú yǒu shēn), “the reason I have great trouble is that I have a body” (corpus-grounded at the book level: 道德經). It does not mean ordinary worry; it is calamity, the thing that afflicts you. So the line is not “I love my body but fret over its health” — it is the far sharper claim that the very thing held dear is the seat of the affliction, and that both halves are true at once. Neither register resolves the paradox, because the Chinese does not. — is “all the more,” an intensifier that deepens the first clause rather than contradicting it. — ⚠ This line is read through 《道德經》 13 and nothing else. The pipeline’s Step-1 research attached a destination-realm and supreme-deity framing to it; that framing is rejected in full — no such term appears in this line’s Chinese, and none is supplied in either register or in this apparatus. (The 吾乃 line does carry divine address of its own — see [^wn2] — and it is not read back into this line.)

ZT2
喚起患得患失 有情似無情大哉天地
huàn qǐ huàn dé huàn shī · yǒu qíng shì wú qíng dà zāi tiān dì
It calls up the dread of gaining, the dread of losing; feeling that wears the face of no feeling — great indeed are heaven and earth.And out of that comes the endless dread: afraid of not getting, and once you have it, afraid of losing it. Heaven and earth have feeling, and yet wear a face that shows none — how great they are.

患得患失 (huàn dé huàn shī) is a quotation, not a mood. In the 《論語.陽貨》 (corpus-grounded at the book level: 論語) Confucius describes the small-minded man: 「其未得之也,患得之;既得之,又患失之」 — before he has the thing he dreads not getting it; once he has it he dreads losing it — and a man in that state, he adds, will stop at nothing. The doubled construction is the diagnosis, so both registers keep it doubled rather than compressing it to “anxiety.” Note what the line claims: attachment to the bodily self does not stay confined to the body; it propagates outward into everything the self can hold. — marks a seeming: heaven and earth have feeling and yet wear the face of having none. The English preserves the seeming and neither resolves it into indifference nor into hidden affection. — 大哉 (dà zāi) is the classical exclamation of awe, not a measurement of extent: “great indeed,” not “how vast.”

ZT3
成仁取義悠悠兮美名遺
chéng rén qǔ yì yōu yōu xī měi míng yí
To complete benevolence, to choose what is right — far-reaching, enduring — and a fair name is left behind.To carry goodness through to the end, and to choose what is right even when it costs you — that reaches far and lasts long, and what remains behind is a good name.

Two separate citations, fused. 成仁 (chéng rén) is from the 《論語.衛靈公》 (corpus-grounded at the book level: 論語) — 「志士仁人,無求生以害仁,有殺身以成仁」, there is giving up the body to complete benevolence. 取義 (qǔ yì) is from the 《孟子.告子上》 — 「舍生而取義」, letting go of life and taking rightness; ⚠ this attribution is carried from the pipeline’s Step-1 research and came back UNGROUNDED against the local 典源還原 classics corpus (78.4, below the confidence threshold). It is standard and uncontroversial — one of the most famous lines in the Mencius — but it rests on the researcher’s authority rather than local verification.悠悠兮: 悠悠 is the far-reaching and long-enduring; the 兮 particle carries the verse line’s sigh, held in English by the em-dashes. — ⚠ The plain classical moral sense is the whole sense here. Step-1 research glossed the pair with a named-organization attainment framing; that gloss is rejected and appears nowhere in either register or in this apparatus.

ZT4
博厚乃土地 唯有道德輔其親
bó hòu nǎi tǔ dì · wéi yǒu dào dé fǔ qí qīn
Broad and deep: such is the earth; only the Dao and its virtue uphold that closeness.Broad and deep — that is what the earth is like; and the only thing that can hold up such closeness is the Dao, and the virtue that comes of it.

博厚 (bó hòu) is the 《中庸》’s word for the ground’s own virtue — 「博厚,所以載物也」, broad and deep, and therefore it carries all things (corpus-CONFIRMED; the local corpus indexes the passage under 《禮記》, of which the 《中庸》 is the thirty-first chapter — the same source). The teaching states 博厚乃土地 outright, so neither register glosses the image. The practical claim underneath it is that bearing capacity is not stamina: the ground carries what is set on it because of what it is, not because of what it decides. — ⚠ 輔其親 is genuinely ambiguous, and the ambiguity is preserved rather than resolved. 輔 is to assist or prop up; 親 is closeness, kinship, drawing near. The line reads either as the earth’s intimacy with everything it bears, or as those nearest to a person. Both are classically supportable and the Chinese does not disambiguate; “uphold that closeness” holds both without collapsing either. Flagged for senior awareness, not as an error.

吾乃 Self-Introduction · recited

WN
吾乃 白水老人 奉了 Φ命 降臨德恩 進門已將 皇Φ參拜 再問賢弟妹們各皆安好
wú nǎi · bái shuǐ lǎo rén · fèng le · Mǔ mìng · jiàng lín dé ēn · jìn mén yǐ jiāng · huáng Mǔ cān bài · zài wèn xián dì mèi men gè jiē ān hǎo
I am the Elder of White Water, bearing the Eternal Mother’s decree, descending to the Dé Ēn hall. Having entered the door, I have already made my reverence to the Sovereign Mother, and now I ask my worthy younger brothers and sisters — are you each and all well?I am the Elder of White Water. I come bearing the Eternal Mother’s command, down to the Dé Ēn hall; and on stepping through the door, the first thing I did was bow before the Sovereign Mother. Now I turn and ask my worthy younger brothers and sisters — are you all keeping well, every one of you?

⚠⚠ 白水老人 is rendered “the Elder of White Water” and nothing further — the name the speaker gives, with identity otherwise unstated: neither asserted nor denied. The pipeline’s Step-1 research asserted that this name IS the posthumous title of a specific named historical person belonging to a specific named religious organization, and further characterized the whole document as that organization’s literature. Both claims are rejected in full and appear nowhere in this file — not in either register, not in this apparatus, not in the header. Per the standing guard rails, who a name refers to is treated as unknown unless documented in project files or confirmed by Phil, and no doctrinal or organizational label is applied either to the speaker or to the text. This teaching is described only as a Dao cultivation teaching. Any future editor consulting external research on this name should apply the same rejection. The text withholds; so do we.

本訓 Main Teaching · recited

B01
浮生人事看過往 起起伏伏失主張
fú shēng rén shì kàn guò wǎng · qǐ qǐ fú fú shī zhǔ zhāng
In this floating life, look back across all that people do and all that has passed: rising and falling, rising and falling, until one loses one’s own hold.This life of ours floats along like something adrift on water; look back over all that people do and all that has already gone by. Up and down, up and down — and somewhere in all that rising and falling, a person loses hold of their own direction.

浮生 (fú shēng) carries the 《莊子.刻意》 image 「其生若浮,其死若休」 — his life is a floating, his death a rest (corpus-grounded at the book level: 莊子). Rendered “this floating life,” keeping the buoyancy together with the impermanence; “fleeting life” would drop the image, which the teaching needs intact because its last line answers it with feet on solid ground (see [^b09]). — 主張 (zhǔ zhāng) is one’s own governing resolve, the capacity to steer oneself — not “opinion.” — The reduplication 起起伏伏 is preserved as repetition in English because the wearing-down is cumulative: what costs a person their hold is not one blow but the churn.

B02
經歷了滄桑更懂得自我學堅強
jīng lì le cāng sāng gèng dǒng de zì wǒ xué jiān qiáng
Having lived through seas turned to mulberry fields, you understand it all the better — learn, for yourself, to be strong.Once you have lived through the great upheavals — the losses and reversals that turn a life over the way an ocean turns into farmland — you understand it far better; so learn, by yourself and for yourself, to be strong.

滄桑 (cāng sāng) is short for 滄海桑田, seas becoming mulberry fields — an image of upheaval on a scale built for geological time. ⚠ The figure is traditionally traced to an old account of the immortal Má Gū (麻姑), who is said to have watched the Eastern Sea turn to farmland three times over; that attribution could not be verified against the local classics corpus, so it is stated softly here and asserted as a confirmed textual citation nowhere. The image itself is secure. — The Elder shrinks the cosmic scale deliberately to the size of a single life: the losses and reversals a person has actually survived are their own seas and fields. — 自我 insists the learning is firsthand and one’s own, and is learn, not teach — nobody hands it over. The weight of the line sits on 更懂得: hardship by itself does not make anyone strong; going back into it and understanding it does.

B03
修辦道路上更懂得堅強 同心同德駕法航
xiū bàn dào lù shàng gèng dǒng de jiān qiáng · tóng xīn tóng dé jià fǎ háng
On the road of cultivation and service you understand strength all the better; of one mind and one virtue, we sail the Dharma-boat together.On the road of cultivating yourself and carrying that out in service, you come to understand strength better still; of one mind and one virtue, we sail together the boat of the teaching that carries beings across.

修辦 (xiū bàn) is a transparent compound — 修, to cultivate oneself; 辦, to carry it out in service — and is rendered by those plain components. ⚠ It is not labelled as any organization’s internal term; Step-1 research proposed such a label and it is rejected. — 同心同德 (tóng xīn tóng dé) is the 《尚書.泰誓》 phrase 「予有亂臣十人,同心同德」, ministers united with their ruler in mind and in virtue (corpus-grounded at the book level: 尚書); rendered literally, so the classical weight survives inside an otherwise modern line. — 法航 (fǎ háng), also written 法船, takes its generic Buddhist reading: the teaching as a vessel carrying beings across the sea of birth and death. ⚠ No named-organization mission framing is attached to it; the Step-1 gloss supplying one is rejected, consistent with this corpus’s earlier handling of 法船. The point of pairing the two phrases is simply that this boat is not sailed alone.

B04
諸佛菩薩的愿立 學擔當把愛來傳揚
zhū fú pú sà de yuàn lì · xué dān dāng bǎ ài lái chuán yáng
The vows the buddhas and bodhisattvas set — learn to shoulder them, and carry love out into the world.The buddhas and the bodhisattvas each began by setting a vow — learn to take that up on your own shoulders, and take love and pass it on.

(yuàn) is the vow — the resolve set at the outset. The order is instructive and is preserved: the vow comes first, and the capacity to fulfil it grows in the fulfilling, not the other way round. — 學擔當 is not admiration but imitation: 學 is to learn by doing as they did, and 擔當 is to take the thing onto one’s own shoulders. — 傳揚 is to spread abroad and proclaim; the Chinese leaves the destination open and neither register closes it.

B05
使命扛 努力道播揚 集力量 發揮所長
shǐ mìng káng · nǔ lì dào bō yáng · jí lì liàng · fā huī suǒ zhǎng
Shoulder the mission; press on, and let the Dao be spread; gather strength together; bring out what you do best.Take up the task. Work at it, and let the Dao be spread. Pool your strength together. And give what you are best at.

The four short beats of this line are the teaching’s rhythmic centre, and both registers keep them as four. — 發揮所長 (fā huī suǒ cháng) is the most practical instruction in the teaching: 所長 reads `suǒ cháng`, “what one excels at” (not `zhǎng`), and 發揮 is to bring out fully a capacity one already has, not merely to “give.” Nobody is told to become the same as anyone else — a hall is kept by people doing different things well. — 集力量 carries no first-person pronoun in the Chinese, and the English does not add one. — reads `káng`, to shoulder a physical load; reads `bō`.

B06
熱忱的心融化冰霜 喜悅的愛溫暖心房
rè chén de xīn róng huà bīng shuāng · xǐ yuè de ài wēn nuǎn xīn fáng
A heart of ardor melts the ice and frost; a joyful love warms the chambers of the heart.A heart that stays warm melts the ice and the frost; a love carried with gladness warms the rooms of another’s heart.

融化 is melt, not break — the cold of a guarded or disappointed heart is warmed open, never shattered, and the choice of verb is itself the method. — 心房 (xīn fáng) keeps its architectural sense, the chambers or rooms of the heart, rather than being flattened to “heart.” — The line is double-edged by design: what it describes as reaching another person is also a question put to the one doing the carrying, since a heart that has itself gone cold cannot warm anybody.

B07
道的種子傳遍十方 悉心照顧 道德發揚
dào de zhǒng zi chuán biàn shí fāng · xī xīn zhào gù · dào dé fā yáng
The seed of the Dao passes through the ten directions — tend it with your whole heart, and let the Dao and its virtue be carried forward.The seed of the Dao is passed on in every direction there is — north and south, east and west, above and below. Tend it with your whole heart, and let the Dao and its virtue be carried forward.

十方 (shí fāng) is the generic Buddhist reckoning of space — the four cardinal and four intermediate directions plus above and below, i.e. everywhere there is. ⚠ No named-organization mission framing is attached to it; the Step-1 gloss supplying one is rejected. — The line’s real weight is not 傳遍 but what follows it: 悉心照顧 is the vocabulary of looking after something living — a garden, a child, a sick person. Sowing is the easy half; the seed that is scattered and left dies on the ground. — 發揚 is carry forward / propagate, an outward transmission, not mere emergence.

B08
讓這世界充滿著希望 願賢弟妹們
ràng zhè shì jiè chōng mǎn zhù xī wàng · yuàn xián dì mèi men
Let this world be filled with hope. May you, worthy younger brothers and sisters,Let this world be filled with hope. And my wish for you, worthy younger brothers and sisters, is this —
B09
真心真意 腳踏實地 無怨無悔 責任肩扛
zhēn xīn zhēn yì · jiǎo tà shí dì · wú yuàn wú huǐ · zé rèn jiān káng
be true in heart and true in intent, feet set on solid ground, without resentment, without regret, carrying the responsibility on your shoulders.be genuine in heart and genuine in intent; keep your feet on solid ground; hold no resentment and no regret; and carry the responsibility on your own shoulders.

腳踏實地 (jiǎo tà shí dì) — feet set on solid ground — is the deliberate counterweight to the 浮生, the floating life, named at the opening of the 本訓 (see [^b01]): a life that began adrift ends the teaching standing on something. — 無怨無悔 answers the dread of gaining and the dread of losing of the opening verse (see [^zt2]) directly: no resentment for what was not given, no regret for what was spent. — 肩扛 (jiān káng), to carry on the shoulders, returns the whole teaching to the body it opened with — the body named as the great trouble in the very first line is, in the very last line, the thing that carries the load. The verb of shouldering appears three times across the 本訓 (學擔當 · 使命扛 · 責任肩扛), and both registers keep it physical each time.