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率性進修班

善愿壇 · 2020.09.13

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鎮壇詩 Opening Verse · sung to 〈碎心花〉

ZT1
與時伸屈 以義變應
yǔ shí shēn qū · yǐ yì biàn yīng
Stretch out or draw back as the moment requires; meet every change by what is right.Reach forward or draw back, whichever the moment asks of you; and whatever changes, meet it by what is right.

與時伸屈 — to stretch out or draw back as the moment requires; the image behind it is the inchworm’s bend, which is what makes the reach possible. Not opportunism: 以義變應 makes 義 (rightness, what one owes) the governing standard for the adaptation, so what changes is the posture, never the principle. ⚠ The researcher traces the phrase to a Warring-States compendium of the Confucian stream, but the classics corpus could not ground it (69.3) — the plain sense is rendered and no source is asserted. The related “change with the times” sensibility is genuine: 尺蠖之屈,以求信也 (the inchworm bends in order to extend) is corpus-confirmed at 89.9 from the 繫辭 of the Book of Changes.

ZT2
崇德修慝 敬慎天地
chóng dé xiū tè · jìng shèn tiān dì
Raise up virtue and root out the hidden ill of the heart; stand reverent and careful before Heaven and Earth.Build up your goodness, and dig out the ill that hides inside your own heart; stand before Heaven and Earth with reverence and care.

崇德修慝 — corpus-CONFIRMED to the 顏淵 chapter of the Analects (96.5), where Fan Chi asks about 崇德 / 修慝 / 辨惑 and the answer is given as 先事後得 (“put the work first, the gain after”) for 崇德, and 攻其惡,無攻人之惡 (“attack your own faults, not other people’s”) for 修慝. 慝 (tè) is specifically an evil that hides in the heart — the English must keep both the hiddenness and the fact that it is an ill, not merely a “fault.” 崇德而廣業 is separately corpus-confirmed (100) from the 繫辭 of the Book of Changes. 敬慎 — reverence joined to carefulness; two words, not one.

ZT3
明通端愨 養心滌慮
míng tōng duān què · yǎng xīn dí lǜ
Clear-sighted and penetrating, upright and sincere; nourish the heart and wash its cares away.See clearly and understand all the way through; be upright and plainly honest; feed the heart, and rinse its churning thoughts clean.

明通 — luminous comprehension, understanding that penetrates rather than skims. 端愨 (què) — uprightness joined to plain, unornamented honesty. — to rinse a vessel clean; — the calculating, deliberating traffic of the mind, not “worry” in the modern emotional sense. ⚠ The researcher traces 明通端愨 to the same Warring-States compendium as [^zt1]; the corpus could not ground it (72.8) and no source is asserted.

ZT4
立命了命 行其道濟
lì mìng le mìng · xíng qí dào jì
Establish the ground of your life, and bring that life to its completion; walk the Dao and carry its deliverance.Set your life on solid ground, and carry that life through to its completion; walk the Dao, and ferry others across on it.

立命 — corpus-confirmed (86.9) to Mencius 盡心上: 「夭壽不貳,修身以俟之,所以立命也」 — steadying oneself in cultivation whatever fate allots, establishing the inner ground of a life amid an uncertain outer one. 了命 — bringing that same 命 through to completion: resolving the question of life and death. 行其道濟 — the line works as instruction first (“walk the Dao and carry its deliverance”; 濟 = to ferry across) and embeds 道濟 / Dao Ji, the Holy Teacher’s own Buddha-name: the teaching signs itself in the act of instructing. The class’s own existing 白話訓 transcript independently records 濟公活佛 self-reporting that Buddha-name at this same phrase — corroboration, not inference. The pun is neither translated away nor over-marked.

調寄:碎心花
diào jì: suì xīn huā
Melody: “Heart-Shattering Flower”

吾乃 Self-Introduction · recited

WN
吾乃 南屏道濟 我是 南屏小仙童 隨 恩師同領Φ命 進到善愿佛堂 隱身已將 皇Φ參 再問徒兒們心安不安
wú nǎi · nán píng dào jì · wǒ shì · nán píng xiǎo xiān tóng · suí · ēn shī tóng lǐng Mǔ mìng · jìn dào shàn yuàn fó táng · yǐn shēn yǐ jiāng · huáng Mǔ cān · zài wèn tú ér men xīn ān bù ān
I am Dao Ji of the Southern Screen — I am the Little Immortal Lad of the Southern Screen — following our Gracious Teacher we received together the Eternal Mother’s mandate, entered the Shan Yuan prayer hall, and hidden from sight have already paid our respects to the Sovereign Mother — and now we ask you, disciples: are your hearts at peace?I am Dao Ji of the Southern Screen — and I am the Little Immortal Lad of the Southern Screen — following our Gracious Teacher, the two of us received the Eternal Mother’s command together, came into the Shan Yuan prayer hall, and, keeping ourselves out of sight, have already bowed before the Sovereign Mother — and now we ask you, disciples: are your hearts at peace?

Two speakers, and both must survive in English. 吾乃 南屏道濟 names the Holy Teacher under his Southern-Screen title; a second clause introduced by 我是 names 南屏小仙童, the Little Immortal Lad of the Southern Screen. 同領Φ命 says the Lad receives the Eternal Mother’s mandate jointly with the Teacher — do not collapse the two into one voice, and do not demote the Lad to a silent attendant. Φ命 / 皇Φ — Φ stands for 母. Φ命 is the Eternal Mother’s mandate; 皇Φ, the Sovereign Mother, is a distinct and more exalted address, and the two tiers are kept lexically apart in English. No English pronoun is used for either. 參 (cān) — to pay homage, to have audience; not 參 shēn/cēn. 隱身 — hidden from sight: the obeisance was made before manifesting to the assembly. — sequential “then,” not “again”: the deities pay their respects to the Sovereign Mother and then turn to the assembly. 徒兒們disciples, never “children” (see [^bx01] for the word that does mean children). The 吾乃 stays a verse line with em-dash caesuras mirroring the source’s own 全角 breaks; ⚠ whether a reader build should break it into shorter lines is left as a senior/build-level call, not decided here.

本訓 Main Teaching · sung to 〈熱烘烘的太陽〉

BX01
降凡塵渡迷娃 返故家呀返故家
jiàng fán chén dù mí wá · fǎn gù jiā ya fǎn gù jiā
Down into the dust of the world, to ferry the deluded children across — return to the old home, ah, return to the old home!Down into the dust of this world, to carry the lost little ones across — come back to the old home, ah, come back to the old home!

迷娃 ≠ 徒兒 — two different English words. 娃 genuinely means babe/child and denotes the beings lost in delusion, the offspring of the origin; 徒兒們 (BX02) is the assembly actually being addressed and is always “disciples.” — to ferry across. 返故家 — 故家 is the original home one came from, not merely a former address. 呀 + the doubled phrase is structural, carried by the borrowed melody 〈熱烘烘的太陽〉 — every 本訓 part opens with one (返故家呀返故家 / 頃刻間呀頃刻間 / 起別分呀起別分 / 饒有用呀饒有用). The repetition is preserved in English; it is not redundancy to be tidied away.

BX02
家鄉的書信徒可收到了嗎
jiā xiāng de shū xìn tú kě shōu dào le ma
The letter from the old home — disciples, has it reached you?The letter sent from the home you came from — disciples, has it reached you?

書信 — the letter sent from the source home. here is 徒兒, the disciples being addressed — the same word as 徒兒們 in the 吾乃, and again “disciples,” not “children.”

BX03
曾經浪跡海角天涯
céng jīng làng jī hǎi jiǎo tiān yá
Once you drifted to the corners of the sea and the edges of the sky.For a long time you wandered with nowhere of your own, out to the farthest corners of the earth.

浪跡 — to roam with no fixed abode; the drifting is homelessness, not adventure. 海角天涯 — the sea’s corners and the sky’s edge: the farthest ends of the earth.

BX04
醒悟當下不再痴傻 (其一)
xǐng wù dāng xià bù zài chī shǎ · qí yī
Wake now, in this very moment, and be deluded and foolish no longer. (Part One)Wake up now, in this very moment, and be lost and foolish no longer. (Part One)

當下 — the immediate present, this very moment — pointedly not some better moment later. — infatuated delusion; — dull-wittedness. The source’s own `(其一)` part marker is kept attached to this line.

BX05
十萬八千眼前 頃刻間呀頃刻間
shí wàn bā qiān yǎn qián · qǐng kè jiān ya qǐng kè jiān
The hundred and eight thousand li lie right before your eyes — in a single instant, ah, in a single instant!That whole vast distance — a hundred and eight thousand li — lies right there before your eyes, in a single instant, ah, in a single instant!

十萬八千 — the unit 里 (li) is elided in the source; it is restored in English as “li” and not converted to miles, which would fabricate a wrong figure (108,000 li ≈ 54,000 km). ⚠ The number is proverbial for the vast span to the far shore; that resonance was never corpus-tested and no source is asserted. 頃刻間 — a single instant; the whole force of the couplet is the collision of the immense distance with the instant.

BX06
得師指點玄迴光見性天
dé shī zhǐ diǎn xuán huí guāng jiàn xìng tiān
Receive the teacher’s pointing to the mystery, turn the light back around, and behold the heaven of your own nature.Receive the teacher’s pointing to what lies hidden, turn the light of your awareness back on its own source, and see the open heaven of your own true nature.

指點玄 — the master’s direct pointing-out of the mystery, the hand that indicates rather than the doctrine that explains. 迴光 — turning the light of awareness back around upon its own source, rather than outward onto objects. 見性天 — beholding the heaven of one’s own nature.

BX07
維皇降衷恆萬法根源
wéi huáng jiàng zhōng héng wàn fǎ gēn yuán
The Sovereign on High sent down the goodness within — eternal, the root and source of all dharmas.The Sovereign on High sent down that goodness planted deep inside you — it never ends, and it is the root and source from which all things arise.

維皇降衷 — corpus-CONFIRMED (100) to the 湯誥 of the Book of Documents: 「惟皇上帝,降衷于下民」, “the Sovereign Lord on High sent down the good nature upon the people below.” is the inward moral endowment. ⚠ Rendered as the citation: 維皇 is deliberately not doctrinalized into a named deity of this lineage, and is deliberately left off the Scroll Elevation Map’s Level 0 — the source’s own 抬頭 spacing elevates Φ, 皇Φ and 恩師 but conspicuously does not elevate 維皇, so the scribe treated it as the classical quotation it is. This is a source-driven decision, not an inferred one; a future session should not silently “fix” it to match 皇Φ. 萬法根源 — the root-source of all dharmas.

BX08
在聖不增在凡不減 (其二)
zài shèng bù zēng zài fán bù jiǎn · qí èr
In the sage it is not increased; in the ordinary person it is not diminished. (Part Two)It is no greater in a sage, and no smaller in an ordinary person. (Part Two)

在聖不增在凡不減 — corpus-CONFIRMED (100) to the Heart Sutra’s 「不生不滅,不垢不淨,不增不減」. The doctrinal point is 佛性本自具足: the nature is neither added to by sagehood nor subtracted from by ordinariness. The line closes two opposite escapes at once — “I am too ordinary for this” and “cultivation is accumulation.”

BX09
不墮於塵法中 起別分呀起別分
bù duò yú chén fǎ zhōng · qǐ bié fēn ya qǐ bié fēn
Do not fall, among the dharmas of dust, into raising distinctions — raising distinctions, ah, raising distinctions!Among the dusty things of this world, do not fall into cutting them up into this and that — cutting them up, ah, cutting them up!

別分 — an inversion of 分別 for the melody: the discriminating mind that splits what it meets into this and that. 塵法 — the dharmas of dust, the things of the phenomenal world. The line forbids not the world but the reflex of carving it up.

BX10
知見立知者即無明本根
zhī jiàn lì zhī zhě jí wú míng běn gēn
To erect a knowing upon knowing and seeing — that is the very root of ignorance.To set a knower on top of plain awareness — that, right there, is the root of all ignorance.

知見立知者即無明本根 — corpus-CONFIRMED (97.9) to fascicle 1 of the Śūraṅgama Sūtra: 「知見立知,即無明本;知見無見,斯即涅槃,無漏真淨」. The structure must survive intact: 知見 = bare knowing-and-seeing, awareness as such; 立知 = erecting a knower on top of it, a head set upon a head (頭上安頭); 無明本根 = the root of ignorance (avidyā). nominalizes the act, not the person. Do not soften this into “thinking too much” — the claim is precise and structural, and it is the pivot of the whole teaching.

BX11
煩惱妄想故憂苦日深
fán nǎo wàng xiǎng gù yōu kǔ rì shēn
Afflictions and deluded imaginings — and so sorrow and suffering deepen day by day.Vexations and false imaginings — and so worry and suffering grow deeper by the day.

— a consequence marker: the afflictions and deluded imaginings of the preceding line are why the suffering deepens. 煩惱 — the afflictions (kleśa); 妄想 — deluded imagining, the mind’s fabrications.

BX12
了達原來清淨法身 (其三)
le dá yuán lái qīng jìng fǎ shēn · qí sān
Realize it fully: all along it was the pure Dharma-body. (Part Three)Understand it right the way through: all along it was the pure, undefiled true body. (Part Three)

了達 — to penetrate a thing thoroughly, right through to the bottom; not merely “to realize.” 原來 — all along, as it turns out; what is discovered was never absent. 清淨法身 — the Dharmakāya, the undefiled true body: the eternal, formless reality-body of a Buddha, held in this tradition to be already complete in every being. Kept technical as Dharma-body in `scholar`; `plain` gives the meaning (“the pure, undefiled true body”) without importing a new claim.

BX13
緣起不礙性空 饒有用呀饒有用
yuán qǐ bù ài xìng kōng · ráo yǒu yòng ya ráo yǒu yòng
Dependent arising does not obstruct the emptiness of nature — and so all is richly of use, ah, richly of use!That everything arises through causes and conditions does not stand in the way of its having no fixed nature of its own — and just because of that, everything is richly usable, ah, richly usable!

緣起不礙性空 — corpus-CONFIRMED (98.4 / 99.0) to the Mūlamadhyamakakārikā: 「眾因緣生法,我說即是無,亦為是假名,亦是中道義」 and 「以有空義故,一切法得成」. 緣起 = dependent arising, that all phenomena come to be through the meeting of conditions; 性空 = emptiness of own-nature, that nothing so arisen has an independent, unchanging essence. 不礙 is the load-bearing word: the two are not a contradiction to be resolved but two faces of one thing. 饒有用 is the consequence, not a separate claim — precisely because they do not obstruct one another, the phenomenal world stays fully serviceable. Rendering 饒有用 as a free-standing assertion breaks the couplet’s logic.

BX14
諸佛的妙理無關文字攻
zhū fú de miào lǐ wú guān wén zì gōng
The wondrous principle of all the Buddhas has nothing to do with laboring at the written word.The wondrous principle the Buddhas hold has nothing to do with grinding away at books and words.

文字攻 — 攻 is to assault, to grind away at, as in hard study; the target is laboring at the written word as a substitute for realization, not literacy or scripture as such.

BX15
心心能相印萬法皆通
xīn xīn néng xiāng yìn wàn fǎ jiē tōng
When mind can seal with mind, the ten thousand dharmas all open through.When one heart can meet another and match it exactly — the way a seal presses into clay — everything opens through.

心心相印 — seal pressed to seal: a carved stamp either matches its impression exactly or it does not, and the transmission it names passes outside words, mind meeting mind directly. ⚠ The researcher traces the phrase to a Tang Chan record of the mind-transmission (「以心印心,心心不異」); the classics corpus does not hold that text (66.2) and no source is asserted — the plain sense is rendered. 萬法皆通 — the ten thousand dharmas all open through.

BX16
前聖後聖一道同風 (其四)
qián shèng hòu shèng yī dào tóng fēng · qí sì
The sages before, the sages after — one Dao, one and the same wind. (Part Four)The sages who came before and the sages who came after — one Dao, and one and the same wind moving through them all. (Part Four)

前聖後聖 — the sages who came before and those who came after. ⚠ A possible resonance with a Mencius line about earlier and later sages holding to one and the same measure was never corpus-tested; it is noted only as a semantic echo and no source is asserted. 同風 — the same breath, the same custom, the same transforming influence: one wind blowing through all of them. Plural “sages” is correct here; the no-plural norm governs 神/gods, which does not occur in this teaching. The line closes the arc of the whole teaching — the 鎮壇詩’s Confucian-stream vocabulary and the 本訓’s Buddhist mind-nature doctrine are gathered back into a single source. The source’s own `(其四)` part marker is kept attached to this line.

調寄:熱烘烘的太陽
diào jì: rè hōng hōng de tài yáng
Melody: “The Blazing Sun”