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南極仙翁 慈悲訓示

德恩壇 · 2022.10.30 · 二天感恩前人紀念班

20221030CAde*

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鎮壇詩 Opening Verse · recited

ZT1
南北奔波四處走
nán běi bēn bō sì chù zǒu
North and south I hurry, walking in every direction;North and south I have hurried, walking every road there is;

The name-acrostic — the four 鎮壇詩 lines open 南 / 極 / 仙 / 翁, spelling the speaker’s own name, 南極仙翁. English cannot carry the device; no line’s meaning has been bent to force an English acrostic, and the Airtable `冠頂訓` field is empty, so this is an observation rather than a flagged formal device. 奔波 — toilsome rushing back and forth. The labour in this line is the Elder’s own: he describes his travelling before asking anything of the listener.

ZT2
極處有緣來尋找
jí chù yǒu yuán lái xún zhǎo
at the farthest reaches, those with the affinity come seeking.and at the very ends of the earth, those whose conditions have ripened come searching.

極處 — the utmost, remotest place. 有緣 — the karmic conditions for an encounter having ripened; not “destined” and not “lucky.” In Buddhist usage 緣 is neutral — the conditions that must come together before anything can occur — so 有緣 names readiness, not fortune.

ZT3
仙人凡人來做否
xiān rén fán rén lái zuò fǒu
Immortal or mortal — will you come and do it?An immortal, or an ordinary person — will you come and do it?

— read fǒu, the classical interrogative particle (not ): the line is a genuine question put to the assembly, the only one in the teaching. — to take it up, to do the work of it; the source supplies no object, and the openness is deliberate. The English leaves it equally open (“do it”), rather than supplying “this work.”

ZT4
翁叟童幼亦成佛
wēng sǒu tóng yòu yì chéng fú
The old and grey, the young and small — they too become Buddhas.The old and grey-headed, the small children and infants — they become Buddhas too.

翁叟 / 童幼 — two words for the aged and two for the young, the two groups usually excused from serious work (one as too late, one as too early). 亦成佛 — 亦 (“also, too”) carries the whole force: buddha-nature is not rationed by age. Plural “Buddhas” is correct here; the no-plural norm governs 神/gods, which does not occur in this teaching.

吾乃 Self-Introduction · recited

WN
我是 南極仙翁 今奉 Φ旨 來至佛堂中 隱身早叩 皇Φ容 再問問傻寶寶們安不安容
wǒ shì · nán jí xiān wēng · jīn fèng · Mǔ zhǐ · lái zhì fó táng zhōng · yǐn shēn zǎo kòu · huáng Mǔ róng · zài wèn wèn shǎ bǎo bǎo men ān bù ān róng
I am the Southern Pole Immortal Elder, today bearing the Eternal Mother’s decree, come into the prayer hall — hiding my form, I make my early kowtow before the Sovereign Mother’s countenance, and then ask, and ask again: are my silly little ones at ease?I am the Southern Pole Immortal Elder. Today I come bearing the Eternal Mother’s command, into the prayer hall — and keeping myself out of sight, I bow low first of all before the Sovereign Mother; only then do I turn and ask, and ask again: are you at ease, my silly little ones?

Φ旨 / 皇Φ — Φ stands for 母. 奉Φ旨 is bearing the Eternal Mother’s decree; 皇Φ, the Sovereign Mother, is a distinct and more exalted address — the two tiers are kept apart in English, and no English pronoun is used for either. 南極仙翁 — also called 南極長生大帝, the white-haired, high-browed Star God of longevity of the folk image, with dragon-headed staff and peach. 早叩 — the first/early obeisance, performed before manifesting; 隱身 (“hiding my form”) means the assembly was not meant to see it. House convention renders 叩 as kowtow, the full prostration, not a bow. 傻寶寶 — 傻 is the affectionate “silly” of a grandparent, never derogatory; 寶寶 is “little ones / babies.” 問問 — the doubling is in the source (“ask, and ask again”). ⚠ 安容 — 「安不安容」 closes on 容, which also ends 皇Φ and rhymes with 佛堂; the rhyme pressure is visible and the compound is unusual. Rendered for the plain sense (“at ease”). No character was changed or “corrected” — flagged for senior review, and if the 原稿 or the 借竅 recording settles it otherwise, that governs.

本訓 Main Teaching · sung to 〈三輪車〉

BX01
好寶寶明理先 十惡改之篤行前
hǎo bǎo bǎo míng lǐ xiān · shí gǎi zhī dǔ xíng qián
My good little ones, understand the principle first — the ten evils, reform them, and set earnest practice at the front.My good little ones, first understand the principle of things — then reform the ten evils, every one, and put wholehearted practice out in front.

明理 — to see clearly the pattern of things and the principle within one’s own nature (Confucian 理 = both the root order of the world and the moral standard native to the heart). 十惡 — a precise decalogue, not vague wickedness: three of body (killing, stealing, sexual misconduct), four of speech (lying, ornate/flattering speech, divisive speech, harsh speech), three of mind (greed, hatred, delusion). Kept as a countable “ten evils” in both registers rather than softened to “bad habits.” Four of the ten are things one says. 篤行 — the fifth and final step of the Doctrine of the Mean’s five-step ladder of learning (博學之、審問之、慎思之、明辨之、篤行之), corpus-confirmed verbatim: steadfast, undiscounted practice, not “good behaviour.” 先 / 前 are the line’s rhyme pair, and the couplet is the knowing→doing axis in miniature.

BX02
日課做感恩勉 日新又新德養涵(其一)
rì kè zuò gǎn ēn miǎn · rì xīn yòu xīn dé yǎng hán qí yī
Do your daily practice, urge yourself on with gratitude — renewed each day and renewed again, steep and nourish your virtue. (Part One)Do your daily round of practice, spurring yourself on with a grateful heart — made new each day and new again, let your virtue steep and grow. (Part One)

日課 — the fixed daily observances: bowing, incense, recitation, self-examination. 日新又新 — from the Great Learning, the inscription on King Tang’s washbasin, 「苟日新,日日新,又日新」 (corpus-confirmed verbatim). The doubling is kept in English because it carries the allusion — and because it sets up 湯 two lines later (see [^bx04]). 德養涵 — 涵養德 inverted for the rhyme; 涵養 is to steep or soak, not to build. Virtue is absorbed over time, the way tea colours water.

BX03
好寶寶慎行言 君子知過無掩藏
hǎo bǎo bǎo shèn xíng yán · jūn zǐ zhī guò wú yǎn cáng
My good little ones, be careful in conduct and careful in speech — the noble person knows his faults and hides nothing.My good little ones, take care in what you do and in what you say — a person of true character knows his own faults and covers up none of them.

慎行言 — 慎 governs both 行 and 言, hence the doubled “careful … careful” in English. This picks up directly from 十惡 in BX01, four of whose ten items are speech. 君子 — the Confucian noble person, distinguished not by having fewer faults but by his relation to them. 掩藏 — to cover over and conceal, a doubled compound; the emphatic 無 is what lands.

BX04
大道行坦蕩蕩 悔之改之日月湯(其二)
dà dào xíng tǎn dàng dàng · huǐ zhī gǎi zhī rì yuè tāng qí èr
Walk the great Dao broad and open, at ease — repent it, reform it, wash it clean, sun and moon. (Part Two)Walk the great Dao with a wide, open, untroubled heart — be sorry for the fault, put it right, wash it clean, sun and moon. (Part Two)

坦蕩蕩Analects 述而, 「君子坦蕩蕩,小人長戚戚」 (corpus-confirmed), and 君子 stands in the immediately preceding line, so the allusion is live rather than decorative. It names an inner spaciousness, not merely walking honestly. ⚠ 日月湯an interpretive reading, NOT an attested classical phrase; the corpus grounding does not list it. The researcher’s reading is that 湯 puns on 商湯 (King Tang, the very figure behind 日新又新 at BX02) and on 湯 as hot water / washing (as in 赴湯蹈火), with 日月 = day after day. Both registers therefore render the surface only — “wash it clean, sun and moon” — so both readings stay open to the reader; the pun is presented as a reading, hedged, in the explanation, and is not asserted here. Flagged for senior review.

BX05
好寶寶簡易行 樂善歡喜惡意泯
hǎo bǎo bǎo jiǎn yì xíng · lè shàn huān xǐ yì mǐn
My good little ones, walk the easy way, the simple way — delight in goodness, be glad, and ill will dissolves.My good little ones, walk the way that is easy to understand and simple to follow — take joy in doing good, be glad, and ill will vanishes without a trace.

簡易 — technical vocabulary from the Book of Changes 繫辭上, 「乾以易知,坤以簡能」: the highest principle is easy to know and simple to follow, and that is precisely why it reaches everyone and endures. Not “take it easy,” “keep it simple,” or “practise without effort.” (The corpus grounding could not pinpoint the long 繫辭 passage and marks it UNGROUNDED at 59.9; 易簡 as a 繫辭 term is not in doubt, but no claim is built on the exact passage.) 樂善lè shàn, joy in the good, not duty toward it. — extinguished, effaced without trace; ill will is not attacked but displaced.

BX06
心澄澈自性明 佛光照耀平等心(其三)
xīn chéng chè zì xìng míng · fó guāng zhào yào píng děng xīn qí sān
When the heart is clear and limpid the self-nature shines — the Buddha’s light falls on the heart that holds all as equal. (Part Three)When the heart is clear and settled, the pure nature you have always had shines out — and the Buddha’s light falls on a heart that holds everyone as equal. (Part Three)

自性 — the Chan self-nature: originally pure, unborn and undying, complete in itself. Platform Sutra, 「何期自性,本自清淨」 (corpus-CONFIRMED at 98.9). Kept technical as self-nature in `scholar` — not “true self,” “inner Buddha,” or “soul”; `plain` renders the meaning (“the pure nature you have always had”) without importing a new claim. The work is clearing, never construction. 平等心 — impartial regard for all beings, without near or far, loved or hated, high or low. Not “fairness,” and not “equality” in the civic sense.

BX07
好寶寶承先志 善惡包容育養之
hǎo bǎo bǎo chéng xiān zhì · shàn bāo róng yù yǎng zhī
My good little ones, carry on the aspiration of those who came before — good and bad alike, hold them within and raise them up.My good little ones, take up the aspiration of those who went before you — the good and the not-yet-good alike, take them in and bring them up.

承先志 — 先志 is the aspiration of those who went before. The occasion is 二天感恩前人紀念班, a two-day class of gratitude commemorating the Elder forerunners, which is why the inheritance register is warranted; the source says 先, not 前人, so the title “Elders” is not imported. 包容 — to contain and accept without rejecting, not to tolerate at a distance. Note that the object is 善 alike — both, not only the promising. 育養之 — to raise and bring up; 之 takes people as its object.

BX08
育德行蒙發志 小心翼翼愛護之(其四)
yù dé xíng méng fā zhì · xiǎo xīn yì yì ài hù zhī qí sì
Nurture virtue and conduct, kindle the will of the still-untutored — with reverent, unslackening care, cherish and protect them. (Part Four)Nurture their virtue and their conduct, kindle the will of those who are only just beginning — and with reverent, unflagging care, cherish and protect them. (Part Four)

— the unlearned, the newly-sprouting (as in 童蒙, and the 蒙 hexagram of youthful ignorance) — a beginning, not a defect. 發志 — to kindle the will; 蒙發志 is therefore beginners whose aspiration is just awakening, and 愛護 says to protect them. (Reading 蒙 as “receive” is not taken: the parallel with 育德行 and the object 之 make the beginner-reading the coherent one.) 小心翼翼Book of Songs 大雅.大明, of King Wen: 「維此文王,小心翼翼。昭事上帝」 (corpus-confirmed at 95.1). The register is reverent watchfulness in serving what is above, not mere caution — the reverence must stay audible or the line collapses into “be careful.”

調寄:三輪車
diào jì: sān lún chē
Melody: “Tricycle”